tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7003940594582925571.post6048602562829362720..comments2023-08-29T01:34:00.749-07:00Comments on Questions in Black and White: In Black and White We Lie Tonight -Freewrite-Sarah Siwickihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01708386682912104078noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7003940594582925571.post-4681905728827425672009-01-20T18:20:00.000-08:002009-01-20T18:20:00.000-08:00Hi Sarah... I really love the poem you made from y...Hi Sarah... I really love the poem you made from your freewrite. I find I often get great stuff from freewriting. My favorite "like a ghost town's peeling paint" - GREAT imagery!Charli Henleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03658855543720819878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7003940594582925571.post-56108365930228075612009-01-18T12:00:00.000-08:002009-01-18T12:00:00.000-08:00You have such a talent for combining innocence wit...You have such a talent for combining innocence with the darker side of life. I like the revisions you made(and that you posted both,) though as quickly as you write, the first version is just as good. Too many wonderful lines to choose from, but the first one "Black and white leaves the rust to be imagined.." is just perfect:)<BR/><BR/>I'll steal from Mr. Darrow, "Bravo!"Every Photo Tells A Storyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03914175541948429064noreply@blogger.com