Blue eyes radiate
youthful life,
her smile revealing
but a small portion
of the love
she has to give.
When the warming sun
chases away shadows
cast by a lesson
in modesty
her mischievous
soul abounds
in dimples
that could melt
the coldest heart.
Golden locks fall
around childish cheeks
in swirling ringlets
only slightly tamed
by a bonnet stitched
with mother's care.
3 weeks ago
5 comments:
yes.
yes.
Lovely:)
"but a small portion
of the love
she has to give."
I really like those lines:)
And the "bonnet stitched with mother's care"
So much warmth in your poem.
When I read the title I thought "Girl" by The Beatles, but then as I read the poem through this innocent image reveals itself, very pure poetry in the sense that you are getting to the core of something.
Thanks for the post.
-Thomas
Hey Lisa, thanks so much for stopping by, your enthusiasm is very catching !
I like those lines too Faith :)
That song was running through my head as I was writing this piece,
thank you for your comments Thomas ...
this blue-eyed girl appears to be you
this blue-eyed girl appears to be you..
Good light hearted piece..
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